Bleach

This is an amazing peice, I really enjoy it honestly it is oustanding! but there is one thing taht keeps jumping out at me and it's that Ichigo seems out of place. HIs attitude and the energy that is given from him is spot on but it seems that he is too detailed to fit in this peice. I understand that it would be extremely difficult to add the same "messy" (sorry there is preobably a better word to describe this style but I can't think of what it is) feel to him, especially since you don't want him to blend into the background. So to reiterate, my only suggestion is to make Ichigo more "messy" or more like the sword. You could maybe try making the ouf te arm and waist less neat or add flecks of gray to the black cloak.
Again this really is an outstanding peice and I enjoy ijt very much, it was just that one thing that I notice.